Surreptitiously, I
Gaze upon your face
Set in deep repose,
Offering scant clues of
A special, inner place.
Upon your face a smile
Develops and hints of a
Loved one only you can see.
Sadly, an affaire de coeur
That leaves no room for me.
Gazing upon face and sprinkling love is very amazing with this sharing. Wonderful drafting shared...10
Greetings! Thank you for your interest and comment and your very kind rating. I am most glad you found it an enjoyable read. Best wishes!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
R B, I love this poem and am going to rate it a ten even though it contains one small typo that I'm sure you will fix later. In line eight, I'm sure you meant LOVED ONE instead of LOVED ON.
Thank you, Kim for your observation (taken care of) and your very generous rating. I am most pleased you found the work to your liking. Best wishes and thanks, again!