R B Seals

Bronze Star - 2,679 Points (Columbus, Ohio)

Interlude - Poem by R B Seals

Surreptitiously, I
Gaze upon your face
Set in deep repose,
Offering scant clues of
A special, inner place.

Upon your face a smile
Develops and hints of a
Loved one only you can see.
Sadly, an affaire de coeur
That leaves no room for me.

Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak, love, lovers

Comments about Interlude by R B Seals

  • Kim Barney (12/4/2015 7:12:00 PM)

    R B, I love this poem and am going to rate it a ten even though it contains one small typo that I'm sure you will fix later.
    In line eight, I'm sure you meant LOVED ONE instead of LOVED ON.
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    R B Seals (12/4/2015 11:37:00 PM)

    Thank you, Kim for your observation (taken care of) and your very generous rating. I am most pleased you found the work to your liking. Best wishes and thanks, again!

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 1:51:00 PM)

    Gazing upon face and sprinkling love is very amazing with this sharing. Wonderful drafting shared...10 (Report) Reply

    R B Seals (12/4/2015 5:57:00 PM)

    Greetings! Thank you for your interest and comment and your very kind rating. I am most glad you found it an enjoyable read. Best wishes!

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 4, 2015

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