Internal Retaliation Poem by Abdurrahman Ardo

Internal Retaliation

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My base is under attacked
It was ambushed
By a one lady troop
Who got armor
And tonnes of ammo

I became a captive
Being jailed not in prison
But in the battlefield
I was barricaded
Unarmed!
I listen to the melody
Of pain
Hug the platoon
Of worries

The motive behind
The invasion
Is to decode me
And brainwash me
Make me a toy
Her winter soldier

I closed my eyes
And call suicide squad
Grab an Uzi with
A barrel of bullets
Me and my squad
Fight for my freedom
We win and regain our unit

Luckily enough,
She was wounded
She couldn't evade
Deadshot tried to finish her
I stopped him
Pay her with a leathel punishment
She rather die
I forgive her
And let her free

Boom!
I open my eyes
Just to see that
I'm still a captive
Struggling to gain my freedom
From someone
Who was once my pal
Now my number one
Not enermy though
But there is no word
To describe her
I'm still the victim.

Tuesday, August 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: punishment,sad,soldier,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ardo. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 29 August 2017

make me a toy - winter soldier, good one.

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