Friday, May 18, 2012

'Intimate Intention' Comments

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Moment...
I saw you
walked that day
it seemed to me
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Gina Onyemaechi 19 May 2012

Hi there, Thanks for your comment on my poem. As for your piece, the sentiment is nice, but the expression needs to be more poetic. I hope you don't mind me saying so. Best wishes, Gina.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
Marvin Brato Sr
Marvin Brato Sr
Davao City, Philippines
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