Marvin Brato Sr

Bronze Star - 2,146 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

'Intimate Intention' - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

I saw you
walked that day
it seemed to me
a sudden magic
lit my being
which gave
and courage
to approached
and befriended you.

later I met you
face to face
and you were
kind to me
even smiled
that shown
your pretty
which drove
me to admire you.

Soon enough...
we got acquainted
and realized
that we were
in love with
each other
that lead the way
to innate romance
which enthused joy
and later made love
we now cherish.

Comments about 'Intimate Intention' by Marvin Brato Sr

  • (5/19/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Hi there,
    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    As for your piece, the sentiment is nice, but the expression needs to be more poetic. I hope you don't mind me saying so.
    Best wishes,
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 18, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 25, 2012

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