Suzaku Vaneko

Rookie (May 15,1995)

Into The Abyss - Poem by Suzaku Vaneko

As I fall into the abyss,
I close my eyes and ask myself, 'Am I gonna die? '
Falling, I am falling
I hear someone calling,
calling my name, but I can't answer
I can't speak
'Am I dying? '
I ask myself, where's the voice coming from? Who's there? As if someone cares, no one ever did, they all left me to die....
As I fall into the abyss I wish I did not exist

Comments about Into The Abyss by Suzaku Vaneko

  • Shihabudheen K J (12/6/2012 12:14:00 PM)

    A very deep write.feel like once we should fall into such an abyss rather than absorbed by soil. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/23/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    life is an abyss... you fall right down untill you run out of time...and the fall is scarey but you wish you could do it again.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 6, 2012

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