Suzaku Vaneko

Rookie (May 15,1995)

Stopping Time, A Whispered Goodbye - Poem by Suzaku Vaneko

Time is ticking away
So fast, too fast
Time is running by even as I stand still
Time stops as I think of him
I'm a waiting his arrival
He should be here by now
My heart is hurt, As I cry, blood escapes from my eyes
My heart breaks in two
Then finally he shows
I cry more as I reveal a knife that I hid in my sleeve
He begins to cry
'Stop' is all he could manage
I take the knife and cut myself open
amd rip out one half of my heart
Blood spills from my mouth as I say 'I give you half my heart and I die for you.That's how much I love you....'
I begin to colapse but he catches me and as I bled out I whisper, 'Goodbye.'


Comments about Stopping Time, A Whispered Goodbye by Suzaku Vaneko

  • Shihabudheen K J (12/6/2012 12:45:00 PM)


    Oh my god.a great work.an awesome poem.a lover of vampire is quite equipped to write such catching lines between beauty, love and death.it is better to die than to be never loved at all. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 29, 2012


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