Into The Black Hole Poem by Patti Masterman

Into The Black Hole



Into the black hole heaven of heart
You will go, when death comes beckoning.
In the hidden vortex of no-time,
Unknown colors await your discovery;
Never heard before music notes will chime.

Safe from the world, you'll live aside,
Where everything's a flowing-backwards tide.

Sunday, May 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,heart,heaven,safe,unknown
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 July 2016

Pamela says philosophical. no wonder i don't get it. :) bri

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Pamela Sinicrope 18 May 2016

A very philosophical write expressed through moving imagery. The title and the use of the terms Black Hole, No-time, and vortex almost make my stomach hurt because I imagined movement at light speed backwards into a beating heart! Then I was slowed down by the closing couplet and felt more comfortable. I haven't read of death being expressed in quite this way. I found this very interesting. None of us 'knows' what death will be like, but unknown notes and colors are enticing and comforting. Thanks for sharing.

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