Investigating The Unnecessary Me! Poem by Aadil Hingorjo

Investigating The Unnecessary Me!

Rating: 4.5


End of the theme is I am in struggle
Attacking it and being attacked in return
I am either simply in or damned out
The world is nakedly out there
I am wasting out my time
There is a war inside me
I can read its destruction
Hemingway is sitting next to me
Winter is occupying me
Solution sucks it out
It is an extremely new view to me
There is the death staring at me
These hours are literally unkind to me
And I don't really like my way
It is an unbearable burden
I am deeply into me; I proudly own myself
It's always been an ideal time with me
I am convinced that I am a cute boy
Cute boy with confusing cracks
It is not alright, and not wrong either
Intellectually intimate yet selfishly uncaring
Isn't it an incredible state, mate?
Neither I nor you can whistle me
I am in my own cabin
Confined to my own tiny temperatures
Kind of distances are calling me
Every day is half; and every day is dusty
There is another shore out there
I must listen to my silence.

Investigating The Unnecessary Me!
Thursday, September 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,inquisitive
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 28 February 2020

Captivating and thought provoking. It did make me think of the current epidemic also. Keep writing and importantly, stay safe.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2020

Cracks of life! ! War inside me! Able to overcome; Able to listen to my silence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2020

An excellent free verse! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured today as POD!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 February 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece......10+++++

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Aadil Hingorjo

Aadil Hingorjo

Sanghar, Sindh, Pakistan
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