Dive Deep Poem by Aadil Hingorjo

Dive Deep

Rating: 4.6


If you're going away
If the drift is all set to do away
Leave all the doors open
Don't shut any of them
Once the heart is hanged
No open door can ignite
Leave the notebook, pen, book
Paper, and the paragraphs open

Tree are sipping silence
Trunks too are deeply mute
Smile of the sand vanishes
And the city's sighs are up
If the time to farewell has reached
Don't postpone it for a second
Enjoy its each beat to the soul
Enjoy this grief; enjoy this pain
Leave the eyes open,
Don't close them
Don't turn them away
Travel into you; dive deep

Thank you the accompanying air
Thank you the reciting rivers
Thank you the silent sea
Thank you the art of the Indus
Thank you the poetess of my heart
Thank you the dancing melody
Thank you the succinct sadness
Thank you all the whispers and wounds
Thank you the windy whistles
Thanks to you the earth, its lyrics, and its ink
Profound thanks to you all the solemn sights.

Dive Deep
Wednesday, November 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: deep,dive,live
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 22 November 2019

Tree are sipping silence Trunks too are deeply mute Smile of the sand vanishes And the city's sighs are up.../// beautiful poetic expression let yourself come out to this earth to this ocean of love let you dive deep to find out the focal fact of it let you earn the eternal throne of it

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Tamara Beryl Latham 22 November 2019

And thank you for a wonderful poetic write. Congratulations, as well, on POD. : -)

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 November 2019

Dancing melody! ! ! Leave all the doors open! Muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 22 November 2019

Great poem. It’s the season for thanksgiving now and always. Congratulations!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2019

A great poem of the day. Congrats, on your featured piece...10++

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Tom Allport 22 November 2019

Giving deep thanks for all that has been lost and found.

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Aadil Hingorjo

Aadil Hingorjo

Sanghar, Sindh, Pakistan
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