Irrelevant Thoughts Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Irrelevant Thoughts

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Nothing hurts me more than my own thoughts
Intelligentsias all over world have offered explanations and always sought
The adoption of whimsical ways to come out of jugglery
It is nothing but state of mind and simple misery

It is known fact that we have temporary refuge
The problems may be more but we make it to seem huge
The ups and down may make it more enterprising
As life it self may be thrilling and promising

If I had poor parenting and no sources
What is use of its remembrance and curse?
It may make you reasonable of course
But after all they are dominant and driving force

Human mind works at faster space
Some of us take special pride in race
Color, cast and creed also occupy most of the time
Who then has to be blamed for it anytime?

We tend to loose few steps for futile adventures
That doesn’t show way or completely ensure
Rather it pushed us to the brink
Where we can only hope of losing ship or sink

The human mind may be called think tank
Where millions of ideas invade and sink
Some may take to useful conclusion
Rest may not warrant even inclusion

I have tried to struggle for temporary objects
It has found unfavorable and some times rejected
But that has not pushed me to an absolute end
As it provided many means to amend

Thoughts are nice to cultivate mind
It has unique way to explore and find
What we need to emphasize is its proper application
It must have some reasoning and direct relations

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2011

Maria Ionescu great words, my friend about an hour ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2011

Gloria Rodikis Yes thoughts pursue us! 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1 person

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2011

Hasmukh Amathalal Ravi Anantharaman Actually, it is not our thoughts that explore life but our very mind. Thought is only the voice of mind textured in a language and if we can really see, man can really work up his life in deep silence and not when he is not. Thoughts can be so distracting and the illustration is that we have more out put of work when man works with concentration. The more he is in the concentrated form, the less thought actually he has. Mind becomes voiceless but the show would continue in three-fold or ten-fold fashion. Our ancient rishis had really given us this technique of getting into our inward silence rather than cultivating thoughts. One more thing. Can we really require a language for our thinking purpose? No, absolutely no. For the primitive man, where was any language but only the natural voices around him? Yet, he cultivated life to a higher degree in the course of ages. Thoughts are only vehicles of mind. All the great creations of life are really born out of silence. All great inventions are born out of silence. What we have to teach our younger generations is the art of silence, how to lessen our thoughts, how to minimize the trouble in having a gross mind. The very first line of the poem is suggestive of the trouble in having thoughts, in general. Even the pleasant thoughts can bring us emotional choking at a later stage. This is the truth. May god bless you. 11 hours ago via · Like 2 seconds ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2011

N Srinivasa Reddy one is victim of his own thoughts...good or bad. 6 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2011

Thoughts are nice to cultivate mind It has unique way to explore and find What we need to emphasize is its proper application It must have some reasoning and direct relations

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