Is My Son Sleeping? Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Is My Son Sleeping?

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I am holy father I am thinking,
My children are ever linking.
Where is my holy son I know,
For me devotion he does show.

Oh children, is my son sleeping?
Do you know where is he creeping?
He obeys my command for you,
Following his path you obey true.

Blue sky witnesses dove does sing,
Nature keeps for you everything.
Ringing again bell whispers moon,
If you are sleeping do awake soon.

I know my son is singing new song,
He is in my touch although in long.
He transfers my message in wisdom,
He is king of kings in your kingdom.

Who tells my son is sleeping there?
I know he is alert ever to take care.
He is singing again only my glory,
Writing heaven, I write new story.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,30 April 2015. All rights reserved.

Thursday, November 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: father and son,life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2016

picture of Angel mia LOVE xAdorable poem wow excellent ink...tfs my friend xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo God bless you 30 Apr 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xMoving and very creative. Lovely poem thinking as Him. 30 Apr 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of blue......... xgood work 30 Apr 2015 by blue......... | Reply picture of moeze lalji xLovely poem 30 Apr 2015 by moeze lalji | Reply

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Bill Khaki 25 October 2020

Son should take rest after hard work. However you have expressed your filial love nicely here.

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Valsa George 02 December 2019

When troubles beset us, we complain that God is sleeping! Never.....! The son of God is ever alert and he was sent to the earth by the Heavenly Father to redeem mankind! The Christian belief of the Father and Son are beautifully incorporated in this religious write!

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Nice observation is made on sleeping of son. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 August 2018

I know my son is singing new song, He is in my touch although in long. He transfers my message in wisdom, He is king of kings in your kingdom..- a wonderful spiritual poem . you are a great spiritual poet. tony

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Gajanan Mishra 17 November 2016

my holy son, my glory, meaningful sir. how are you? Namaskar sir.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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