Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Is That You? Comments

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I turned over a rock, I held a leaf in my hand.
I saw the glitter in the desert sand.
I said God, is that you I see?
And he answered, 'yes juan, it's me.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 04 July 2012

Oh so absolutely correct; you are right on here my good friend. Very nice write.

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Valerie Dohren 03 July 2012

Lovely poem Juan - for me, God is our higher self and therefore always with us. Great write.

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Barry Jablonski 03 July 2012

Very nice Jaun, well constructed! !

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Heather Wilson 03 July 2012

I really like this, God is everywhere, not confined to one place. a lovely thought in this poem.

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