Anita Atina


It Feels Like A Pause - Poem by Anita Atina

It feels like a pause

As my life waits for the past to catch up

And the present to fully engage

To inner truths that our souls know

But our mind doesn’t recognise fully


So at this pause

Where past and present converge

A rich tapestry of feelings

With rays of hope, repose

Waiting for the dam to fill


And on reaching fullness

Will the floodgates open

Will life, burst forth

Sweeping away the past debris

And finding a new path ahead


Treasures too it will carry

To the next destination I’m told

But for now

I wait for the pause

To quietly unfold


Comments about It Feels Like A Pause by Anita Atina

  • (4/29/2008 11:50:00 AM)


    Anita, another wonderful outing here. The hope that we all carry with us well represented here. Top marks and thanks for sharing this beautiful poem my friend.
    David
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  • (4/14/2008 10:34:00 PM)


    The pause...the present moment we need to live in and need to respond to if we are to be fully alive... (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 3:28:00 AM)


    This is a superb blend of spiritual truth-seeking and personal angst. Waiting for ' The present to fully engage/To inner truths that our souls know/But our mind doesn’t recognise fully' is brilliant - as is the clear structure and language of this fine poem.
    love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, May 9, 2008


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