It's Been Raining For So Long Poem by Lyn Paul

It's Been Raining For So Long

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There is nothing more satisfying
Than to know who you are
How long it has taken
You have travelled so far

Scolded and bruised
In so many ways
Losing so much
In every yesterday

But you can only give yourself
Just so many times
Now battered and bruised
Now accepting what seems like an ungodly crime

Yet nothing can be changed
Except to actually think of you
You have never done so in the past
Yet now someone has too

So

Where things go from here
It is now just one day, as each day shall come
Wished I had known this long ago
To disinherit a power too rich it has left me numb

Sometimes the more that you give
Is the more that is taken
It really does seem
Like a rude awakening

Realising in time
That you cannot give anymore
For hands have been burnt
You've lost the game
There is no score

Except the outcome
Is
To stop and think of you
Maybe no one has ever done this
That is why you have never seen it through

You are really on your own
On this big wide Earth
Your journey may be smooth
Or a puzzle starting from birth



Copyright Reserved 15th October 2015
Lyn Paul

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 15 October 2015

HUGE HUGS.... this is a powerful write

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

Yes, at least occasionally, one should think of themselves first. I felt the pain and the revelation in this poem, Lyn. Superb write!

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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

We cannot change others we begin to realise we can only change ourselves. A very powerful poem dear Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

How long it has taken! ! Nice piece of work.

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Maria Gonzalez 26 October 2015

It is the truth Lyn, sometimes we give so much, we end up giving ourselves away. We do need to stop and think of ourselves sometimes and be kind to ourselves as well. Day by day, step by step, we will return to ourselves. Then we will operate our lives with more wisdom. We will give, but give wisely. Thank you Lyn. I always appreciate your poems. They reach me. Stay blessed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2015

Yet nothing can be changed Except to actually think of you...A very thoughtful and nice poem shared really. This expresses love here....10

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Michael Walker 15 October 2015

I think that life is a puzzle from birth. We have to look after ourselves in the struggle. It can keep raining for a long time. Michael Walker.

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