It's For My Dad Comments

When I lost him, I thought, that evening, I was devastated. I know how you feel, child.But recalling his character and his tales and stories and how he made fun and joked about life's cruelty and that sacred stamina to fight and encounter, traits he instilled in me, I realized sooner that he will be upset to see me deteriorating in my sadness. True I miss him and you miss yours but yours must be a proud father of a proud daughter who paid him a proud tribute here. Be strong and I know you are and keep writing dear.

so touching and heartfelt poem, i really feel what you are feeling now, cuz i have tried this lethal feeling...(allah yrham all our fathers and corpses) you poem is really so true! ! ..write more poems u r talented..allah ysabarna..

Really excellent mam, amazing expression..........

oooo! ! ! God be with you dear........ed3y laho bel rahma........allah yerhamo....this poem touched my heart that i am about to cry.......forget your sadness and defeat your fears....be strong and don't let sadness control you.....good poem you have a talent that you have to develop....write more and tell me when you write a new poem...

dear i can see ur tears in ur words, i can feel ur pain & ur great lack 2 ur father really it's a very sad poem.ur feeling & scream reached my heart & entered my ears.but u must have faith it's the only thing that will help u getover this & focus in ur life & future be sure that u'll be someone.agreat kind person, a caring mother, a great poetess & remember always that the coming is good, that u r not going 2 face any sad time after today.god bless u.

nice and touching. beautifully worded.i hope it is not real. voted10 surya

great touching poem! ! honestly it brought tears in my eyes! ! 10 frm me cheers