Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 95,020 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

It's Like An Odyssey - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Your modesty has started,
And it's something I now feel...
Comes from your heart.
Deep it is and it is real.
I hope it never will depart.

Congratulations.
You should be elated.
Congratulations.
You should celebrate.
Congratualtions,
Not everyone can state it...
That they have now arrived,
with this feeling felt inside.

It's like an odyssey!
when a modesty gets started.
Just like an odyssey...
One takes to never leave.
It's like an odyssey.
Your modesty.

Congratulations.
You should be elated.
And...
Congratulations.
You should celebrate this.
And...
Congratualtions,
Not everyone can state...
That they have now arrived,
with this feeling felt inside.


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, September 7, 2012


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