Monday, October 27, 2014

It's Not Fair Comments

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It's not fair
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It's not fair
Miles and miles apart
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Beautiful poem comparing nature and life. Both requires water for nurturing. Relationship is sure to die if not protected properly. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 29 October 2014

Unless we have a heart that knows what truth, respect and love is, that makes our relationships bloom with such beauty of sincere emotions! Stunning write!

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Salini Nair 29 October 2014

Power and greed are weeds Jealousy and anger are pests....a relationship is like planting a tree....great work.................

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