It's Time Poem by Minx Videsben

It's Time

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It really is time now

I feel it rising in my throat

My heart is going slower than normal

My breath stutters and struggles to get out

My head hurts

And so does my wrists

But soon I'll feel nothing

Soon

I will be

Nothing

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
legit wanna fucking kill myself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 September 2017

My heart is going slower than normal My breath stutters and struggles to get out My head hurts And so does my wrists But soon I'll feel nothing Soon I will be Nothing Meeting and parting, life and death, summer and winter are the go of life. We have to love those who are still with us, hopeful about us, those who have not left us like someone else. Keep loving and writing the brighter side too. Thanks poet for so vivid a description of pain within. 10 for it. Regards. Subhas, India

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