Should I? Poem by Minx Videsben

Should I?



I am invisible

Uncared for

Unwanted

Unnecessary

Unneeded

I am unloved

Maybe it would be better

If I had never existed

Or I just stop existing now

Thursday, May 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 18 May 2017

What kind of a thinking is this. Never never go with this idea in life. You are such a wonderful poet and a philosopher in your own right. Please express and share your feelings more often. Thanks. Maybe it would be better If I had never existed Or I just stop existing now

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Jefferson Carter 18 May 2017

Josefina, this isn't too bad but it does, in its taciturn way, try too hard for the reader's pity. Check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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