It's Time To Say Goodbye Poem by Elise Johnson

I hope that your path is well-lit and that you overcome the boulders Oh! and by the way, just a little something to take with you 'You are a great poetess' Love to you and your closest Love duncan X

you make nice experiments in writes, be free ad frank in your own verse.... dexterity must be the real feel... sincerely kee

I agree with Meanie, that comment is right on. Keep writingElise--Melvina

Elise....demanding? Not really...they may be demanding of everyone else...except themselves. Your poetry has tons of potential....keep writing....keep growing...keep fighting...and live your life to the fullest so that you will always have things to write about. Notice the world around you.....the people...their plights, their victories....and take them to that still, silent part of yourself where you create from. You'll be a star.

'one must never surrender to demand' i hope you choose to stay Elise, you express yourself very well :) ~kelly

I think you make some good points here Elise. (real name?) :) I feel bad that your introduction to PH had to be as ''controversial'' as it was! Just realize that if you choose to just get a new name and start posting again.....you don't even have to put your age. If you love to write, WRITE! Never give up what you love doing because you don't feel you're accepted. Wipe the slate clean and start writing! Take care. Sincerely, mary