Fahim Sayed


It Shows, When In Love. - Poem by Fahim Sayed

A little bit of you, a little bit of me
Some sort of bond, or chemistry.

A look in an eye, a deep sigh
Grounded, but still flying high

Caring words and a sweet talk,
Thousands phrases with lips locked.

A light hug and a small kiss,
Memorable moment, to cherish

The past, the present, and the future,
Like minds, but different culture.

Try; but it won’t be enough,
It shows, when in love.


Comments about It Shows, When In Love. by Fahim Sayed

  • (8/30/2008 12:31:00 AM)

    nice really nice. good work (Report)Reply

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  • (8/20/2008 6:48:00 PM)

    I really like this poem. Good work, keep it up: -) (Report)Reply

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  • Mark Nwagwu (8/18/2008 6:33:00 AM)

    a thousand phrases with lips locked
    eye beholding eye lost in the other
    breathe in breathe out fill me up
    leave me gasping
    where there're no spaces left
    your bouncing and romping my life
    now you know I love you

    Fahim, forgive me - your write is so simple and angelic it provoked some thoughts in me urging me to let them out.
    mark
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/18/2008 5:44:00 AM)

    yet love when scintillating by the sizzling mist of love over the lips, the thirst of sand as when quenched by the drizzles of rain...............wonderful imagery of love, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Cyclopseven R (8/18/2008 12:09:00 AM)

    Honeyed very well...such a sweetness. Touched the core of human love. God Bless. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2008 9:03:00 PM)

    a very sweet love peom, (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2008 2:40:00 PM)

    cute and simple; beatiful and lovely :) (Report)Reply

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (8/17/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    lovely love poem, thanks for shraing (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/17/2008 2:31:00 AM)

    i stumbled and fell, but crawled back and standing upright......to fall again.thanks for the piece bro. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2008 2:26:00 AM)

    nice love poem.... when in love you forget yourself....................god bless you (Report)Reply

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  • (8/16/2008 10:22:00 AM)

    it shows that love has no boundaries regardless of race, religion or distance.....
    simple remarkable piece. Thanks
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2008



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