Barry Middleton


It Wasn't Too Surprising - Poem by Barry Middleton

it wasn't too surprising
her eyes were so enticing
it looked like rain
so we stopped beneath our tree

her chin up and excited
the fire was soon ignited
and when we kissed
the lightning just missed me

she really held me tight
to scare away the fright
the rain came down
it was electrifying

I'm sticking to this story
so believe it or be sorry
I'm tingling still
and that there's no denying

no it wasn't too surprising
her eyes were so enticing
it looked like rain
so we stopped beneath our tree

her chin up and excited
the fire was soon ignited
and when we kissed
the lightning just missed me

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about It Wasn't Too Surprising by Barry Middleton

  • Nosheen Irfan (10/3/2016 3:29:00 AM)

    Wowww
    This is beautifully depicted. Romance n rain go together so well. It's a universal fact i guess. In the warmth of love, the rain is always welcome.10 (Report) Reply

    Barry Middleton Barry Middleton (10/3/2016 5:53:00 AM)

    I though you might like this one. Glad you did.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 30, 2016


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