~ Jaunt In Vibe Viagra ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Jaunt In Vibe Viagra ~

Rating: 4.8


~ JAUNT IN VIBE VIAGRA ~

MS. NIVEDITA
UK
8 March 8,2010

Damsel to Beau:

Perpetually I come
Go back, …Poetically
I come…Go back
Want to be not
Anymore but.

Elude every eye
Kibosh all blush
Loom n’ bloom
Why not in you?

Jaunt in your vibe Viagra
Raft with you in Niagara.

With noetic nosegay … I say
You’ll endear …You’ll share
You’ll hear…I’m here
I’m there…I’m everywhere.

My inveigle integrality
Dewed espying gaga zippy
Lovesoaked … Assignation
Conjoin in the fiesta O’ Dear.

No poseur I’m
But En esse éclat
Your fille gala gitana!

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[Emotional Commemoration of World Woman’s Centenary Day....my humble posy bouquet to about half of the population of this planet of which about 60 % are within 30 years of age group.~ niv]






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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitabha Bagchi 07 April 2010

Plucked best emotions and wreathed by best coinage the golden-thread of this poem… Young poet looking Viagra [not textually]…to surge sprout up-lift Romance in a special orbit for spinning to go on…and she set the motion on… ‘…With noetic nosegay … I say/You’ll endear …You’ll share/You’ll hear…I’m here/I’m there…I’m everywhere….’ This… ‘Here’ …’There’…’Everywhere’…represents entire female flock with chaplet… Poet extends ‘With noetic nosegay’… Magnificent way of expression and enjoyed it … AB 10+++ London

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Fantabulous joyride …pulsating… beating… scrambling… Bold… erect…a true poetic nosegay in World Woman’s Centenary Day… by a non-poseuse…who is …’ Your fille gala gitana! ’… Wondrous poem… enjoyed the spirit…how a woman can deliver her unalloyed emotion…’ ‘…Loom n’ bloom…’Why not in you? ...’ A spectacular 10++

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Fantastic Poetic Joyride … espy zippy …evocative …frees mind zapping … Many oldies may go for brow arcing… but indeed a post modern and very BOLD poem… Not with typeface model…freeflowing and wheeling…onward and onward… Poet very intelligently maneuvered and hobnobbed word ‘Viagra’ …With befitting spirit of World Woman’s Day… polyglot galore… Enjoyed its message ... poet what gave… 10+++

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 21 March 2010

Really speaking this is a bold ever poem read never earlier by me. I loved the spirit of the poem. U r so vibrant in your diction. Fantastic choice of ideas and the commitment to poetry... coupled with emotion power-pack...

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Eyan Desir 21 March 2010

Good write interesting

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Ajay Seshadri 05 August 2010

Wonderful diction! I liked the coinage of words. You have a great facility with language that is evident in your poems.

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David Beckham 03 August 2010

Loom n’ bloom Why not in you? ....Unification made possible, with the interweaving of natural existence. Man V woman. Nice poetry. Great work as always

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Lynn Glover 16 May 2010

Poem is very good, you become better with words the more you write. I loved it. Lynn

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Katang Chakravorty 17 April 2010

Colorful fire works and Laser-Show of words ‘…You’ll hear…I’m here/I’m there…I’m everywhere…’ simply wonderful lines… Use of Viagra as metaphor to escalate up-pull of beau by a damsel Rich reading and full of emotional calorie… Thanks for sharing 10++

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Photode Photode 09 April 2010

Fireworks of jocund eye-candy coinages and fountaining emotion…levitating for girls especially teen groups…no concoction or pretension…retention ‘No poseur I’m’ Straight approach with emotional truth and transparency But ‘En esse éclat’…terrific poetically matching befitting French coinage added original flavor of world class French Red Wine…ha ha ha oophs 10/10/10/10

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