~ JAUNT IN VIBE VIAGRA ~
MS. NIVEDITA
UK
8 March 8,2010
Damsel to Beau:
Perpetually I come
Go back, …Poetically
I come…Go back
Want to be not
Anymore but.
Elude every eye
Kibosh all blush
Loom n’ bloom
Why not in you?
Jaunt in your vibe Viagra
Raft with you in Niagara.
With noetic nosegay … I say
You’ll endear …You’ll share
You’ll hear…I’m here
I’m there…I’m everywhere.
My inveigle integrality
Dewed espying gaga zippy
Lovesoaked … Assignation
Conjoin in the fiesta O’ Dear.
No poseur I’m
But En esse éclat
Your fille gala gitana!
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[Emotional Commemoration of World Woman’s Centenary Day....my humble posy bouquet to about half of the population of this planet of which about 60 % are within 30 years of age group.~ niv]
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Viagra is no female stuff...meant for males who lose the very important balance... Good poetic wit...tit for tat...medicated metphor...10
Wow, read all the comments in detail first: -) Why do some feel the need to constrain us, put us in neat boxes, cages, when poets should be able to write express anything their ability allows. In the form style they dictate, through their judgment, especially among a fellowship of poets? Damsel to Beau: Perpetually I come Go back, …Poetically I come…Go back Want to be not Anymore but. This contrast is beautiful, magical, the romantic sentiment in the language of love, and then the first fertile sustained imagery, so appropriate; so calling on multiple levels of physical intellectual interaction. I wonder if really sensuous poets make exceptionally great lovers, as so many poets of fame that come to mind have earned this reputation. I think I better not post my poems on this topic.
Wonderful diction! I liked the coinage of words. You have a great facility with language that is evident in your poems.
Loom n’ bloom Why not in you? ....Unification made possible, with the interweaving of natural existence. Man V woman. Nice poetry. Great work as always
Poem is very good, you become better with words the more you write. I loved it. Lynn
Colorful fire works and Laser-Show of words ‘…You’ll hear…I’m here/I’m there…I’m everywhere…’ simply wonderful lines… Use of Viagra as metaphor to escalate up-pull of beau by a damsel Rich reading and full of emotional calorie… Thanks for sharing 10++
Fireworks of jocund eye-candy coinages and fountaining emotion…levitating for girls especially teen groups…no concoction or pretension…retention ‘No poseur I’m’ Straight approach with emotional truth and transparency But ‘En esse éclat’…terrific poetically matching befitting French coinage added original flavor of world class French Red Wine…ha ha ha oophs 10/10/10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
heheh, don't let theViagra, nab ya, honey Ruthie ;)