I think this poem
on love first then lust
will soar you to the top
of MOUNT EVEREST
and
may there and then
they give you a NOBEL
for so beautifully describing
LOVE
we have all being searching since ages
some feel the ''sloosh....'' is all
- - many like you still feel
Love is breathless and plush
you are right
JK (Jaziv Kamalvi)
May the world reading your poem awake
Jazib KAMALVI'S AND LOVE POETRY LOVE smashes then takes over engulfs all of it friends who love first then a red of this is a must and those who only and forget love for then tis uppermost AND AS FOR ME I KNOW only there is a great commanilty in LOVE AND Both have the letter L as first wow did you not know it..Ignorance in modern era poets is not accepted don't miss a miss similarly in a MISS and Miss okay g
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very fine review of Jaziv Kamalvi's creative work. I must thank both the gentlemen poets who have distinguished themselves through their valuable contributions to this Forum. Thanks for sharing.
your greatness one needs to fathom as submarines fathom seas RM UR an inspiration A SOURCE OF LIGHT FOR SIMPLE POETS LIKE ME LEMME BOW TO THEE rgds ji