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Jealously My Crime

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I hate myself for my sin
my one and major crime
My body feels as weak as tin
the bones much thinner than a dime

Why is this emotion of hate
in my body, soul, and mind
Is it possible that I can't wait
for her and now I must go find

I pray and crave for understanding
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Crystal Torres 05 February 2009

dat was great such a sin to have so much jelousy its ok we are all sinners and especially when it comes to love or hate.. the truth is that we shall adimit it...like a cry form deep with in.. if u r not jelouse u dont really love... bcuz we are only protective of our 'angels from above' the ones that can come and hold u tight.... the only one of which u r willin to fight.... fight for them and all of them... no fear no sorrow just that evil guilt... 10 no doubt

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 20 January 2009

hey ken! ! ! ! its meee! ! ! i love his poem alot! ! ! ! it flows very well and ur such a talented writer! ! ! keep it up tlk to u in bout 5 hours

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Arik Carpenter 15 January 2009

i like how all of it flows so well, ., ., i know how you feel though, ., .,

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 23 December 2008

Quite commendable, considering you're a beginner. Wishing you a bright future, H. Tulsi

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