Jelly Bits Comments

Written from the reverse point of view, you could have had 'Jelly Tots'? Nice one David. Danny

How much joy is present in this poem, for their is no greater joy then the love we receive from our little ones and how wonderful to see a Dad express those feelings while rushing back to savor every blessed moment while 'ye can. Beautiful poem David, you have your priorities straight on, an admirable trait. marci xo

I love this - and Tara's spotted it: how well the rhythm and flow match the occasion!

Fast-paced like the attention span of a wee one.... so cute D! And well penned. t x

Aren't our little ones wonderful? I enjoyed this loving poem, and the humour at the end. Great read, David. Love, Fran xxx