Thursday, November 1, 2018

Journey Comments

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Looks like a creek it is
Flows and flows and flows
Nurturing a wish, a desire somewhere
To becoming a brook on its way fair and unfair
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Anil Kumar Panda 05 November 2018

Very nice. Clever use of metaphors to put your point. Makes interesting reading. Thanks for posting.10++++

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2018

Fantastic metaphor for life. thanks for sharing 10+

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 November 2018

Many many thanks Nehalji........I am truly humbled...........

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Gajanan Mishra 01 November 2018

nurturing a wish flow and flow and flow, beautiful

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