Mamta Agarwal

Rookie - 0 Points (March 27,1951 / India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Joy- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Child slips tender feet,
into new first pair of shoes;
Smiles and runs- squeak, sqeak...


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  • (12/26/2009 8:18:00 AM)


    Shoes with whistle, I still remember,
    Guarded my feet like a squeaking armour;
    Every step was applauded with a squeak,
    And invited kisses to be planted on my cheek.
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  • (12/25/2009 7:52:00 AM)


    YOU HAVE PUT IT ACROSS VERY WELL POETICALLY!
    THIS IS ALL THE TIME HAPPENING AROUND ME IN OUR SOCIETY!
    -Raj
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  • (12/25/2009 2:25:00 AM)


    a wonderful senryu...this joy catches on (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 2:24:00 AM)


    a wonderful senryu mam...this joy catches on (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 25, 2009



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