! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Living In Awareness! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Living In Awareness! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.3


Perception
A bird perched on bare tree top, surveys urban scene.
Wind sneaks in through crevices, in winter unseen.
Autumn leaf aboard the breeze, how with ease it falls.
Sights and quiet help to unwind, on instant recall.

Serenity
Now sombre, now it seems playful; nature mimics life.
My colourful dreams at night help me overcome strife.
On a trip to Uttaranchal, on banks of Ganges,
I felt tranquil as we drove up mountain ranges.

Joy
Night was out of fairy tale, watching starlit sky.
Eased myself out of the bed, feeling on a high.
Symphony of colours, forms waits with much fanfare.
Tying my white boot laces, brace for the chill in air.

Bliss
A vacation here uplifts and fills me with cheer.
Take off my boots feel the dew, a bench beckons near.
Nourished, feel calm and blissful, here, in abode of god.
Live your life abundantly, subtle cues I hear, Lord.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 12 July 2009

A Fourfold Path you teach us, Mamta Mam' - to Percieve, become Serene, feel Joyful and attain Bliss - To find God around us and in us - the aim of Life! Became my favourite at once! Angel

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 July 2009

The sequence from perception, serenity, joy and bliss, from nature and to be at peace with oneself, is not purely looking inwards but connecting to the outward. This is very original and rekindles a sense of affection and love deep inside. I have been inspired by such beautiful writings not only for the sake of writing but seeing life anew. This is a treasure, Mamtaji.10++

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Aamnah Akhtar 10 July 2009

Your write reflects your soul... so pure! !

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premji premji 07 July 2009

reading you is supreme bliss mamtaji.........

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Vidi Writes 06 July 2009

Perception performs with the leaf being at height and then fall Serenity at the lap of nature, a trip to that hill station Joy of that night that brings your boot back to foot Not to fall back, the bliss of dew, the rest at beckoned bench This is a power pack show with great diction. Hats off to this stylish clips.

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Bharati Nayak 06 October 2015

Your poem makes one aware of the joy and bliss around.A great write, loved reading.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 September 2011

Night was out of fairy tale, watching starlit sky. Eased myself out of the bed, feeling on a high. Symphony of colours, forms waits with much fanfare. Tying my white boot laces, brace for the chill in air Very well painted and very good imageries here

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 September 2009

what a lovely home god has given...being aware and in tune brings absolute joy....a lovely poem..into my favs

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Rakesh Bedi 27 July 2009

Perception, serenity, joy and bliss; a thought provoking creation, mamta! (what a strange co-incidence; i happen to be your city-mate!)

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Bob Blackwell 15 July 2009

Mamta, It helps to notice things, to be in tune with nature, to feel the mountain air, to breathe its life, its bliss. It makes us happy. One word for this poem, it is a Joy. love Bobx 10+++

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