Joyriding Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Joyriding

Rating: 5.0


She goes with her new lover.
An unpopular actor
in a red colored racing car.
On the way the police halted them
as it's a stolen car.
The girl still feels it's a movie
until they are taken for custody.

Tuesday, September 12, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: car
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 12 September 2006

Enjoyed the 'reality check' in this one Nimal, an experience we all have eventually.... regardless of the activity.

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Sandra Fowler 12 September 2006

Colorful imagery in this one. These two joyriders are definately headed for a crash The dream has ended and reality has begun. Very original.Nimal. Regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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