A Beggar Maid's Breakdown In The Life Cycle Poem by nimal dunuhinga

All human beings need warmth. Another fascinating story, Nimal. Ten without hesitation. Kindest regards, Sandra

Nimal, I think you're spot on about women in their forties (from my experience LOL) and I love the story you tell and the 'needle in the haystack' metaphor. Yes, the closeness of another body is so important at any age. A thoughtful and wise poem. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx

Dear Nimal, Pepole on the wrong side of 40 and ALONE could enjoy this better. Excellent stuff. Best Regards, Ranjith

Dear Nimal, great...... 'Human Blanket' has enlighten your poem.......... It's a great pleassure to read these precious words. Metta........ Kolitha

Hi i not been this way for a while, this is a good poem money dos not get the things you need in life, its the travling of it, that what life you need. Take care my friend. Roy.

Weather you mean this to be comical or not. This is the funniest thing I've ever read. The off-handedness of the presentation like the gossip of old women is just so telling of the character that the poem displays as someone in dire need of a man for happiness. Which comes to be described as the needle in the haystack. What a sexual pun that is. It's the perfect cliche. A poet friend// RH Peat

The last two lines are very sharp and accurate, well expressed.

Interesting tale of a maiden waiting for the right soulmate A theme you have wrote which is a fact of life good write ++++10 thanks for meditate note I do yoga every day and mqarried to a yoga teacher regards

In so many ways this is a very sad tale my friend Loneliness is such a terrible thing to ache for the comfort of another is in a way a torment on its own,

very interesting..entertaining write indeed...liked it very much...hey who told you woman in forties are naughties, i liked the phrase thoguh..very touching and moving towards the end too..nice//thanks