A Bird Has No Wings In The Storm Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Bird Has No Wings In The Storm

Rating: 3.6


I started re-reading Kawabata Yasunari san's 'Izu no Odoriko'
and I dream of your golden country 'Japan'.
I was surprised as I have been there.
Chiba-ken, Matsudo city, sakura-dori, tokiwadaira coffe master
funabashi Japanese language school,
the railway between Kunugiyama & goko.
Sapporo beer, sake with sakasuki
taste of tempura and udong; sushi and sashimi
the restaurants I visited with my life long friend Shozo Suzuki san and his
family.
I walk towards in the memory lane
melancholy tune of windbells in Yoshiwara,
still I breathe the cool breeze there
and I sniff the fragrance of death from isolated graveyards
I would like to drown in Sumida -kawa
like Dazai Ozamu san who killed himself by drowning in the lakeTamagawa at Inokashira park.
I am sure that you will bury me near by Ishikawa Takuboku san's grave.
Though I am a Sri Lankan, I may be belongs to your soil in my early birth.
Oh! God if you are still remain in the sky; please grant me an opportunity to see them at least once
before I die in my cage.
that's my only wish.


Dedication to my life long friend Shozo.Suzuki & his family. Also to the poetess Sayumi Takahashi san & Yasuyuki Tanaka san.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

Amazing poetic story, nice narration...fine tribute to your friends...10+++

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Luis Gil 06 September 2008

I know why the caged bird sings........

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Sandra Fowler 22 February 2007

Your title is very sad and expressive. I would guess that you go to Japan in your mind quite often. Bittersweet and very beautiful, my friend. As always, Sandra

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 13 November 2006

An excellent lines which float me towads the imaginary place in Japan(I have never visited, but dreamt of) grateful to you for the pleasure given by those nice compossition. With lots of Regards, Kolitha

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Melvina Germain 12 November 2006

An excellent write Nimal and a wonderful tribute to those you miss. Thankyou Nimal for sharing this poem.--Melvina--

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 February 2015

What a soft touching on a palpating heart! wonderfully written.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 February 2015

What a soft touching on a palpating heart! wonderfully written.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 19 July 2010

I enjoyed this very sentimental ending.

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Kee Thampi 11 February 2010

you keep us with a famous story of him walk towards in the memory lane melancholy tune of windbells in Yoshiwara, still I breathe the cool breeze there and I sniff the fragrance of death from isolated graveyards I would like to drown in Sumida -kawa like Dazai Ozamu san who killed himself by drowning in the lakeTamagawa at Inokashira park.

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Indira Renganathan 27 January 2010

I can feel the heartfelt write...a very good dedication...interesting too very much...thank you

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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