The rush as it runs through my veins
Making me believe that I could be insane
Lost in the thoughts of getting stronger
Not seeing as fate says not much longer
My bloods on fire saying go go go
With anticipation like a tiger going to and fro
Lost in the ecstasy of the lifting of weight
In hopes of becoming the next great
They stroke my ego telling me I'm on top
Not seeing that I'm about to drop
I pick up my helper with its long little nose
Just to give myself one step above all my foes
With anger I meet everyone around me
This strength is worth any fee
Lost in the madness of being bold
I never noticed as my arm goes cold
Now I'm here lying on the floor
Seeing as my future becomes a closing door
Yelling out into empty space looking for help
Seeing I lost everyone, because I was all about myself
Rich in imagery, well crafted and powerful write that shows clearly your potential in the Poetry World! WELCOME! I really enjoyed this amazing write and I hope you keep it up! I look forward to read some more of your works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
With anger........................cold. fantastic write. i like it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A cool poem with fire blazing inside yourself ~!