I climbed the hill
the sunshine shone on the fields
the day was as beautiful as a princess ring.
A swallow flew across the blue sky
What a nice scene!
Suddenly blood started issuing from its nares!
The sky went red and the mood became dark.
But it was neither summer nor spring.
Poor bird. It had lived a long happy life.
Then I ventured to swim into the red scene...
But it was just a dream.
From nice pictures to sudden dark ones. Then..just a dream! I really loved the unexpected end! Nice work!
Thanks a lot for you nice comments. The unexpected...is the kernel of the poem.
Αγαπητή Μαίρη...έχετε μεγάλο δάσκαλο και μακάρι να ήταν όλοι σαν και αυτόν για να ''δίδασκαν-καθοδηγούσαν'' όπως αυτός εσάς.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Καλησπέρα Σας Ευχαριστώ Πολύ για τα καλά σας λόγια.