Just A Dream Poem by THEODOROS MANTAS

Just A Dream

Rating: 5.0


I climbed the hill
the sunshine shone on the fields
the day was as beautiful as a princess ring.
A swallow flew across the blue sky
What a nice scene!
Suddenly blood started issuing from its nares!
The sky went red and the mood became dark.
But it was neither summer nor spring.
Poor bird. It had lived a long happy life.
Then I ventured to swim into the red scene...
But it was just a dream.

Thursday, August 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Skarpathiotaki 27 August 2018

Good! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Theodoros Mantas 27 August 2018

Καλησπέρα Σας Ευχαριστώ Πολύ για τα καλά σας λόγια.

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Leloudia Migdali 19 August 2019

From nice pictures to sudden dark ones. Then..just a dream! I really loved the unexpected end! Nice work!

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Theodoros Mantas 24 August 2019

Thanks a lot for you nice comments. The unexpected...is the kernel of the poem.

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Evi Prinou 12 May 2019

Ωραίες εικονες δημιουργεί

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Theodoros Mantas 13 May 2019

Καλημέρα Evi σ' ευχαριστώ!

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 22 January 2019

Μου αρεσει άξαφνο ευγε10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Theodoros Mantas 23 January 2019

Αγαπητή Μαίρη...έχετε μεγάλο δάσκαλο και μακάρι να ήταν όλοι σαν και αυτόν για να ''δίδασκαν-καθοδηγούσαν'' όπως αυτός εσάς.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 22 January 2019

Μου αρεσει άξαφνο ευγε10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 22 January 2019

Μου αρεσει άξαφνο ευγε10++++++++++++++++++++++

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