THEODOROS MANTAS

Gold Star - 7,066 Points (1973 / CHALKIDA)

Goodbye - Poem by THEODOROS MANTAS

I close every door behind
and I sit on the cold floor
with my mind's dark side
and through the window
of my wounded soul
I see a tired blue sky
and I don't know
what to think anymore
I just want to say goodbye.

Topic(s) of this poem: despair

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Goodbye by THEODOROS MANTAS

  • (6/17/2019 9:07:00 AM)

    Just opεn a new door......🌸 θα πρόσθετα εγώ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2019 9:07:00 AM)

    Just oprn a new door......🌸 θα πρόσθετα εγώ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/9/2018 4:10:00 AM)

    Very good poemservice bravo! 10+++++++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (8/28/2018 12:50:00 AM)

    through the window
    of my wounded soul
    I see a tired blue sky....despair expressed soo well.. wonderful imagination of the tired sky and the closed doors and the window view.. write more you have great power to imagine......... thank u. tony
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  • Naila Rais (8/21/2018 9:34:00 AM)

    A nice write.... Keep it up...10...you may like to read my poems too...
    Naila
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  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/21/2018 8:29:00 AM)

    Write comment. Good start, Theodoros. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2018

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 21, 2018


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