Just A Love Song Comments
To write you
These damn words
Coming from
Somewhere else
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A delightful poem... lovely expression. Loved this sweet poem. Top score.
I have to agree with Simone; sometimes love creeps up on you even though you try to deny it. A really good poem. A 10.
It crept up on Kerouac so many times, Carl. Thank you so much for believing it to be a really good poem.
You have me in deep contemplation with this write. It almost seems to be some reluctance to surrender to love in this relationship yet there is more than a human bond from some unknown dynamic. To have a deep devotional connection with all that is and to realise that love comes from more than us is enough to just let be and allow it's course.10+
Simone, I'm not sure why PH hadn't posted my reply. Your very positive thought-provoking comments have really touched mine heart. And I am so very grateful!
Beautiful love song! Love becomes complete when God comes between man and wife or man and woman!
Couldn't agree with you more, Valsa! Thank you so much for believing it to be a beautiful love song.
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12/29/2025 6:06:21 AM # 1.0.0
Dillip, so many THX on 2 levels. Firstly, always an honour when you add my poems to your favourites. Secondly, PH hadn't posted my response to Simone. I sincerely hope that they will remedy that now. Because I truly value her comments!