Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Just An Arm - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is good to draw lesson
It is equally important to mention
The inner bond with good relation
This is time it needs elevation

The sun had been source
Very bright and live force
That can not allow clouds
To come freely and surround

No one can block light
It is his right
Whole world draws full energy
That is wish of almighty too

Rainbow is just an arm
Coming out after rain storms
It has color with clear messages
It is liked in all the ages

Love and miss everything
That comes on the way for something
You may miss your dear ones and find
Little glimpse in all colors to look grand

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/29/2014 4:43:00 AM)

    Re: Just an arm (Score: 1)
    by induce on Tuesday, April 29,2014 (03: 07: 30)
    Jadia, strong words, feeling as though elevation is encouraged here, so much thought surrounding an 'arm'... (no offence) ... I am going on imagery after reading. I felt I saw a mix of amazing angles, excellent use of wording, a solid poem that goes places.

    Keep it up, enjoyed.

    andye
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome shujat ahmed
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 8:45:00 PM)

    Lovely

    Bart Philagree18 minutes ago
    Refreshing and invigorating!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    How we play in thoughts

    Barry.............................17 minutes ago
    Never adding the sums..
    of GREATNESS
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 9:37:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Rohani Daud Lovely poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    It is good to draw lesson
    It is equally important to mention
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 28, 2014



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