Moon is sizzling
Through the coconut fronds
I'm not a monkey
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to touch the silvery diamond moon poetic pen dived into the velvet breezy pond.................excellent imagery.......enjoyable
This is nice to witness the sizzling of moon through coconut fronds. This is difficult to touch the moon for one human being by climbing itself. However this is easier to catch up the moon in pond where reflection is seen. For the pretty Lilly moon has fallen in pond and you have interestingly noticed the imagery. This poem is an excellent poem very well penned.
What a beautiful poem Indira Ma'm. I loved the imagery and the thoughts that flow with it. For the sizzling moon and the velvety touch in the breeze most admirable......10 Hope you are fine and safe.