Saturday, June 20, 2020

Just For That Pretty Lily Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon is sizzling
Through the coconut fronds

I'm not a monkey
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Indira Renganathan
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What a beautiful poem Indira Ma'm. I loved the imagery and the thoughts that flow with it. For the sizzling moon and the velvety touch in the breeze most admirable......10 Hope you are fine and safe.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2020

to touch the silvery diamond moon poetic pen dived into the velvet breezy pond.................excellent imagery.......enjoyable

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2020

This is nice to witness the sizzling of moon through coconut fronds. This is difficult to touch the moon for one human being by climbing itself. However this is easier to catch up the moon in pond where reflection is seen. For the pretty Lilly moon has fallen in pond and you have interestingly noticed the imagery. This poem is an excellent poem very well penned.

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