Veteran Poet - 1,139 Points (11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)


Melvin banggollay

Just say it, you never dare
To hear the love I declare
With every dreams I have
With every beats of my love.

Just say it, you never care
To touch this love so fair
With you its greatest temple
With you its sweetest apple.

Just say it, you never like
To have me as your knight
That I can stop dreaming
To have you in my being.

Just say it, you never want
to see my love's remnant
That I can seek the lady
God had destined for me.

Comments about Just Say It by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

  • Melvin BanggollayMelvin Banggollay (8/6/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    thanks all friends for reading and making a comment on this piece.thanks for the comments (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/14/2008 11:19:00 PM)

    I must agree with the two below commentors, that this fine piece smacks of melodic majique....Very Nicely Done, my friend!

    ~ F j R ~

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/14/2008 11:00:00 PM)

    very nice's an ode or lyrics..just put notes on it, it will be a song..
    well maybe you can submit this to musical arranger..I am not kidding it
    is a good song...A10

    Ency Bearis

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/14/2008 10:51:00 PM)

    Very musical and bold..............10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008

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