Just Thoughts Poem by Srita Sri

Just Thoughts

Rating: 4.5


Like a shadow of mine,
i see you wherever i go.
I try hard and fail to keep up the anger
but all in vain, i cry deep within me

hiding it from my own shadow,
it reminds me of the days and love i have lost
how i wish all this could end
and have a peaceful sleep

all through the day, i see you right next,
comes the night and buries you deeper inside
oh how i regret everything that happened
waiting for a break...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Srita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Antonio Liao 13 January 2009

it seems we are fighting to what is me...a reality that confronted with what is beyond of yourself...a feeling of nothing...a nothing to touch...but only a feeling of nothing at all...so nice.... poem...very something of your own.Thank you..God bless

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V F 06 January 2009

wow.. good to see you write again.. :) Do not bury.. do not hide.. for the pain does not really go away.. simply intensifies.. God bless u.. Hope to see some more lovely poems soon.. :)

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