On The Green Mile... Poem by Srita Sri

On The Green Mile...

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Here comes the saturation point
I am on the green mile

I cant take anymore, for my knees are weak
I agree, i have lost the battle
happy though for the fight i gave

Its the battle of life, too early to lose
here i sit, by the window side
like the sea, the depths of my pain

Looking down at the burial ground
waiting, on the green mile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V F 12 May 2008

this poem has a depth to it that showcases the maturity of the poet.. well done!

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Kee Thampi 12 May 2008

one poem makes it.. Its the battle of life, too early to lose here i sit, by the window side like the sea, the depths of my pain

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Angel bella 12 May 2008

Let this be your rebirth. finally peace and joy

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