Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Just War

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It may be just war
With nothing to offer
Justice or injustice
It is breach of trust and promise

Who will want to suffer?
When it has nothing to offer
Except war widows and orphans
What can be left behind except pain?

Many might have been rendered homeless?
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Guess Who 23 July 2012

Nice poem i loved your vocabulary and very well written Nice Expressions full of meaning keep the good work up Guess Who

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It may be just war With nothing to offer Justice or injustice It is breach of trust and promise

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mmanuel Abasiubong Bassey What a thoughtful reflection. A really nice work.4 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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leafsailor Hiroshima, Nagasaki, revenge, christlike? no, revenge on civil helpless population. Japan, allowed a twisted military, they teach obey.we watched it grow, the world knows what it is doing U.S. could of set the bombs off on the mountain top or off shore I am sorry to say there simply is a will to accept war! your poem addresses that in a powerful way, this deep human tragedy rules us to day soon we will see an atomic war, then the humble will inherit the earth, sadly noeletejadia4708au Brian Bigelow War is an ugly blight anne the wiser

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Kesha Finesse Murphy Very good and true write.. about a minute ago via mobile · Like

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heather wilkins War is a waste of time, and for fools. War causes mass destruction, uncalled for. Is it not better to say, Come let us reason together. hb To prepare a safe world for our children to live in. nice writing. thoughtful.

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Kesha Finesse Murphy Very good and true write.. about a minute ago via mobile · Like

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