Just Wish It Would All End Poem by timothy rauscher

Just Wish It Would All End

Rating: 4.3


emptyness this is the way
i feel everyday of my life
sometimes i just wish
i could end it all
but i think about the ones
that loves me oh wait there
are none it takes courage 4 me
to keep living my life with
no one loving me and if people
do love me that love just ends
up turning into hate and me being
miserable day after day i think
about ending this miserable
life of mine that way i wont bother
anyone with my problems but i just
keep living y you ask i really dont
no y maybe cuz its someone does care
about me i just dont no who that person
is at all i hope i find them

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I agree with Almira Bausley and Grungey Girl...keep your head high, thats the advice i try to give myself...if i can take my own advice, im sure you can take it too

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Sandra Nina 27 October 2007

umm wow it's really deep.... but same as what Almira Bausley said Jesus Loves You! ! ! don't feel this way anymore god is with you if you wan't him in your life

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Almira Bausley 23 October 2007

Jesus loves you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Alison Cassidy 21 October 2007

Pain and anguish drive this sincerely penned piece about youth and despair. Yet I note a hint of light in the last couple of lines. I'm sure writing about how you feel will make a difference. Thanks for sharing. love, Allie xxxx

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Chris Mendros 21 October 2007

Yup, you never know who might be out there, that you'll meet tomorrow, so long as there is a tomorrow. Very strong emotions emanating from this one.

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