Kaaha Tu Kaaha Mey Poem by Amitava Sur

Kaaha Tu Kaaha Mey

Rating: 5.0


Kaaha tu kaaha mey
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Tu haimitha shakkar
Mey hu namkin paani!
Tu oorta hua ek parinda
Mey pinjre me bandhe ek panchi!

Hawa me urta jaaye
Tera anchaal aur woh julfe.
Vatak rahahu meine,
Ye gahera andhere me.


Waadio me khilta jaaye
Tera ghungru woh muskan.
Akele me may sarta hu
Na koi taraang na swapna.


Tere bin ye sunha
Na koi dia na sahara.
Azad kar do mujhe
Mujhe sirf tere hi sang jina.


Tu haimitha shakkar
Mey hu namkin paani!
Tu oorta hua ek parinda
Mey pinjre me bandhe ek panchi!

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Amitava (24.9.2014)


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Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 24 September 2014

The poet has imagined himself as a caged bird crying with tears, and remembering his beloved whose soul is flying in the limitless space. Poets wants to meet her but he knows it's not possible in this life. His grief is a little relieved when he converts his feelings into a beautiful poem, an impressive one. A nice write Amitava Ji.10 without any hesitation.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 September 2014

Wow a great hindu/urdu poetic dialogue btw the caged n the free creature. Kudos poet u write impressive in both languages. And tnx for cmt.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 September 2014

Khaan tu khaan mai..namkeen pani mujhe fuchkaa yaad aane lagaa hai, jee michlaane lagaa hai sunder hai

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