Keats was wrong
A thing of beauty is not joy forever
Nor its loveliness increases,
But it brings only woes and despair.
Tho' it blesses some lovely feelings,
And aching sensations.
But It stings badly,
Like a frost that freezes soul and heart,
Or like a distant Rainbow
Looks ethereal but when touche
Melts in mist.
It's a time Tyranny
And Nature`s revolt
To bring down man
From the state of god.
Isn't 'love' a baby of idle brain?
Touched by Aphrodite's strain,
That incites feelings of lust, and
Seduce a solemn heart,
And begets nothing
but fantasies vain.
Then i restored back my previous comment in a new form... Yes Keats may wrong when he said all those words...because we cant find it true yet No Keats told the true because he knew best what he felt and he wrote what he felt When people judge what was in his heart, dont use eyes but feel the sense Because he believed something, he wrote something No matter what is wrong or right now, or what was wrong or right in the past His work lend true emotion and i will say its right. and you are a good word artist Gulsher_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Are you fencing with me? ? ? :) :) :) : :) tou·ché to͞oˈSHā/ exclamation exclamation: touché (in fencing) used as an acknowledgment of a hit by one's opponent. used as an acknowledgment during a discussion of a good or clever point made at one's expense by another person. ======================= i think someone is down in the dumps again. : ( i'll only comment on the first stanza. favorite lines: But It stings badly, Like a frost that freezes soul and heart, if i could talk to you, you could probably clear up any questions i have about what this poem means, but i don't plan any trips to Pakistan in the near future, AND the ink is running low in my pen, so i'll just say 'thanks for sharing, my friend'. bri :)