Keep Hope Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Keep Hope

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You can not be harmed
You need not be alarmed too
Our blessings are with poetess
Keep smiling on the face

The thief did his job
Might have robbed you little
Thank god, you are saved
As you had dared

Keep hope alive
And live
With some time at home
Come back soon to receive welcome

I was worrying
With lot more in mind to carry
I am relieved
None could believe such incidence

Bon pin is intolerable
That gives more trouble
With little movement even
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Sunday, May 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Lena Bassford likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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extraordinary Chaneia Morris5 minutes ago Very mind blowing and extroidinary Comment +1

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Great poem. Marie Ramos8 minutes ago I enjoyed the rhyming in this poem. Keep writing, enjoyed this poem. Comment +1

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Hmm Jaimie Antoinette8 minutes ago Sometimes it lost me. And tho the title is Hope, and I assume that is the general tone of the poem, it isn't very clear in the lines itself. I found myself having to go back and re-read certain lines to be able to continue it, but I still like it. It created a picture in my mind.

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You can not be harmed You need not be alarmed too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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