Keep Trying...... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Keep Trying......

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I don't want to quit until the last call
to keep trying, trying, trying...WITH DETERMINATION.

I listen to great speeches and elders experiences
to act and plan with DEDICATION.

I always think the past, present and future
to reset, reassess and relive in APPRECIATION.

I earn as much as possible to live righteously
but generously give to live and let live... in DEVOTION.

I wait for the right moment, giving space even for time
to lead a life with out any CONTAMINATION.

I ought to forgive the misdeeds and ill thoughts of wrong doers
to make them less fortunate because of their CORRUPTION.

Friday, August 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: corruption,dedication,lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
don't give up, keep trying, to live righteously
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 August 2016

Until the last call! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 August 2016

verily, our life is a trial, where we have to try and try till the last breath of our life.......10

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thanks al ot dear poet, thanks again for your generosity, welcome

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