Wednesday, October 3, 2012

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Revealing who sits in pits with demons,
Is currently being exposed to those...
Who have accepted being ignored and opposed,
And this has not pleased...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Sara 03 October 2012

I really enjoyed the poem, that brought me into deep though.. analyzing each line in between. Great poem..Great words! (:

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 October 2012

a thought provoking poem. Whoever seem to be powerful, accepted and elected, are the ones, rule and lead our life politically, religiously, economically and many more. when the same elected people become notorious, we would become voiceless, as everyone need to survive and we are unable to fight against the system, which is momentarily under their control and the people on the street like us exhibit herd mentality, which is also not wrong..we have many options to control such issues politically such as 'no confidence motion', but the people in power are more powerful to control the political and administrative machines, so we are forced to wait for the next election..Thank you for sharing!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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