Key Poem by Liza Sud

Key

Rating: 5.0

There's one key to my
religious soul, -
It is sincerity,
Brightness and glow.

It is the sucking
Which angels can do,
Humble as Jesus
Who came to serve you!

How to explain it?
That’s just what I feel.
May be through ages
We may even meet -

I mean spiritual
Meeting of souls.
Now – it’s just virtual
Empty sad stroll.

You were exiting me
only for sex.
I want a prayer,
The Russian church, bless.

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ключ один есть
к моей сложной душе -
искренность это,
и яркость, и свет.

Это отсос
ангелка для меня,
служит мне он,
как смиренность Христа!

Как объяснить это?
чувствую так!
может и встретимся
мы сквозь века.

В смысле - духовные
встречи двух душ.
а в виртуальности -
скука и грусть.

Ты возбуждаешь
для плотской любви.
я хочу в церкви
молиться, прости.

Key
Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 05 November 2015

Soul and soul. A beautiful poem with palpable emotions.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 November 2015

Verily, you are a saintly person

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 November 2015

I want a prayer, The Russian church, bless. Verily, you are a saintly person

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

There is a key to regional feeling of my soul and I open the door of heart by this. Giving a prayer in Church is fantastic. Very amazing sharing.10

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

I mean spiritual Meeting of souls. Now – it’s just virtual Empty sad stroll..........................Superb lines......10 I loved it LIZA.

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